Thursday, February 7, 2013

Epic Fail

 
 
I Lindsay Pate am hereby guilty of an EPIC FAIL! I was asked by the extremely talented and infinitely creative Julie Hutchings to guest write on her new blog series Stories To Strip By.  It is an amazing compilation of writers coming together to make you feel ever so sexy.  Well... I dropped the ball, no excuses, I just flat out let that ball roll down my drive, into oncoming traffic, only to be completely obliterated by a semi-truck. 
 
As I sit here hanging my head in shame, wondering where it all went wrong, it came to me... If I cannot be apart of this blog, I need to somehow support the heck out of it.  What better way than to publicly shame myself and grovel at her talented feet? 
 
So please I beg of you go check out www.deadlyeverafter.com, follow @HutchingsJulie and comment, comment, comment.  Julie and her fellow writers deserve every praise!
 
Mrs. Hutchings is a huge supporter of author on author love and I am proud to "know" her and to be in her circle. 
 
I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy!!
 
 
 
 

Sunday, February 3, 2013

COVER REVEAL & GIVEAWAY: AWAKEN BY JAIME GUERARD

It is your lucky day! You have stumbled upon the exciting cover reveal for a new Paranormal Romantic Thriller novel, Awaken. Written by the endlessly talented Jaime Guerard. Jaime was kind enough to let me be one of the first to share this with you all. You will all enjoy her book and this wonderful cover. Her release date is coming up soon, so get excited and buy the book!
 
TITLE: AWAKEN

AUTHOR: JAIME GUERARD

GENRE: YA PARANORMAL ROMANTIC THRILLER

EXPECTED RELEASE DATE: MARCH 15, 2013

AGE GROUP: 14 - 20+

COVER DESIGNER: ALLIE BRENNAN (B DESIGN)

MOON IMAGE/TREE DESIGNER: STEVEN ASKEW (RED AND BLACK WALLPAPERS)


Final Awaken Cover




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BOOK DESCRIPTION:

Three things run through my mind at this very moment…
ONE, my life as I once knew it will never be the same.
TWO, the person I’m in love with might not even exist.
THREE, the deception that has unfolded before me has the power of life and death.

Sixteen year old, Breanna Davis, has heard the saying; life isn’t always what it seems…well, that saying rings true now more than ever. As horrifying visions appear before her, revealing tragedies that will forever change the fate of those she loves, she realizes that she may be the only person who can stop them from becoming reality. Amongst the chaos of this new discovery, Bre is faced with a stranger, Eve, who moves in on Bre’s friends and begins to follow her every move. As Eve’s true motives begin to surface, Bre must fight against, not only the visions, but the dangers Eve holds close. There is another secret kept- Collin, a boy held captive in Bre’s dreams, the boy she is secretly falling in love with but isn’t sure he even exists. As she tries to make it work with Austin, an old friend who could possibly be more, Bre battles against her feelings for Collin. Bre is faced with an almost impossible decision, to choose her life or follow her destiny. If she doesn’t intercede, people will certainly die. If she does, her own life could be at stake. In the end, if she fails, she’ll lose everything.
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Monday, January 21, 2013

Mechanical Heart Part 3 By: Lindsay Pate and Coreey Seeley


Part three (Corey Seeley): interaction

 
             I stand motionless, before her. Her eyes stay dedicated on me. I start to fascinate every detail of her current appearance; her petite nose, the microscopic freckle underneath her left eye. The detail she contains is extraordinary. She is compelling, and she is about to speak out again. Her lips are dry as the words flow out.


“Are you here to… examine me?”


            A single tear gently falls down her nose and onto her naked leg. She is desperately trying to be brave, and she is. She hasn’t broken down, because if she had, she wouldn’t have made it to this clinic. This is a step in the right direction for her, unless she gets selected for the inter-tain showcase.


            The inter-tain showcase is a live broadcast of human sexual interaction. They select two humans, who have to qualify and meet the standards the administration puts out. The two humans are forced to participate in sexual interaction and to follow every instruction given out by the superior. It’s a gruesome form of payback on our part, but it’s been going on ever since we took control over the humans. They created us for sex, and we created the irony that is, the inter-tain showcase.


            “I am not.” Is all I respond with? I can’t seem to focus on the bigger concern here, because my mind isn’t functioning correctly. My thoughts aren’t matching up with my actions, and I’m acting out on an impulse of some sort, this entire situation is strange. I’m detecting a modification, in myself.


            “Why are you here then?” She says with wakefulness all over her face.


            She asks the exact same question I have been asking myself. As I hurried to this clinic and found her, this question has been haunting my mind. What are you doing?


            “I don’t have all the answers for you…”


            Slam! The door closes shut behind me. I’m caught.
 

“Excuse me, what do you think you’re doing?”
 

            Dr. L-5 storms in the clinic room, demanding answers for the inexplicable scenario he has just walked in on. L stands for Lieutenant, and the 5 is the number given to him as a symbol of recognition. He was built as a Doctor, but he has worked other occupations that earned him the Lieutenant title. He is the leader of this section, and he gives out the orders to every occupational machine in the sector.


            “You better have a good purpose for being in here, or I will report you directly to the administration.” His voice contains signs of resentment.


            “I heard a young female screaming. I came here to make sure she wasn’t trying to harm herself. That is my obligation, to keep the humans alive and well.”


            The words poured out of my mouth. My titanium vocal chords produced those words before I could even generate a solitary thought.


            “Any sounds coming from this clinic are none of your concern. Do you comprehend?”


            “Yes, sir.”
 

            “Good, report back to your assigned area, immediately.”


            I remain silent, deliberately not responding to his command. As I strode out of the room, I glance back at her; her hazel eyes begin to become moist again. I shut the door behind me, but I’m not leaving this clinic alone, I’m bringing her with me. What happens next will instantly become a regrettable action.
 

            I quietly remain outside the clinic room, behind the door. I find myself envisioning his repulsive thoughts as he begins to speak to her. I know what his next move is, and it’s not pleasant.
 

“I will need you to strip from your clothing and stand up straight. Don’t make this more difficult than it has to be.” He says to her with an atrocious attempt at laughter.
 

She seems to be cooperating with him, as she should. One wrong move by her will trigger a brutal assault. I’ve seen humans that disobey orders, and I’ve been forced to clean a lot of blood from the cells in the past.
 

Suddenly, she screams, and I lose all control. I run back into the room, and before he can force a reaction from his artificial expression, I strike my right elbow to the back of his metal-coated skull. Clunk. He falls to one knee; striking him again, I thrust my entire weight onto him as he collapses to the floor. He begins to murmur something, but I don’t fathom the words. I break apart the back of his cranium, grab every wire I see, and yank. Sparks flutter from the tattered wires, and his eyes become dark. He’s lifeless.
 

I raise my eyes to see her unclothed figure standing a few feet away from me. Her eyes resemble a full moon on a dark cloudy night.

 

 

Part three (Lindsay Pate): exposed

 
My body is frozen in place. My eyes ache to blink, but I cannot tear them away from his wearisome expression. I am struggling to make sense of this unforeseen series of events. Did this machine come back to help me? Why would he turn on his own kind? I feel his gaze evading mine and get the sensation I am missing out on something. The overwhelming shock that immobilized me is replaced with utter mortification. In my attempt to understand this bizarre situation, I had forgotten that I stand here completely exposed.

           
I clutch onto my clothing and bark loudly at him, “Turn around!”

           
I dress myself as he faces the steel wall. What kind of machine is this? It is as if he has some sort of actual feeling, actual compassion. I shake my head in absolute confusion, it cannot be. I was told that it was impossible for one of them to develop any sort of consideration for humans. What other explanation can there be? As I fasten the last button on my tattered shirt, I realize we need to clean this mess up before someone sees the examiner crushed, wires gaping out of the back of his lifeless head.  

           
I growl at him, pointing at the pile of steel lying dead on the floor, “What are we going to do with this?”
 

He stands silent and bewildered, gazing at me as if he is unaware of how this situation even came to be. I grasp that I am the one who needs to be in control now.


I put my hands on his arms to soothe him momentarily, “We need to find somewhere to hide or a way to get rid of this body. No one can know about this. Do you understand?”

           
He stares back almost thankfully. It is strange to see emotion on one of their faces.


I ask more gently now, “Is there a place that is yours, a place where only you go?”


He answers uneasily, “My office. It is where I keep track of all of the humans. It is where I organize where everyone should be and what medical attention may be necessary for whom.”

           

I motion once again to the examiner’s corpse, “Perfect, we need to bring him there and hide him. None of them will suspect you right? None of them would ever suspect a machine for attacking another would they.”
 

He appears slightly shamed, “No, they would never suspect me, because, I am not built to react to situations in this manner.”
   

I use my eyes to express the sincerity that I feel, “Well, I am glad you did. I am aware of what could have happened to me. Thank you.”


Once I am certain he understands the depth of my gratitude, I lean down to pick up the body.

 

 

Monday, January 14, 2013

Mechanical Heart Part 2


MECHANICAL HEART: Part Two

A story series by: Corey Seeley and Lindsay Pate.

 
 

Part Two (Corey Seeley): Words.

 
           Words; I have the physical proficiency to speak them, but do I really mean them? Are they sincere? When I speak to others of my kind, we just communicate. It doesn’t feel like a real engagement in conversation. We aren’t programmed to speak certain idioms, because we have the brainpower to decide for ourselves what we will say. Do I even put emotion into the words that I progress? Humans have the facial expressions, the watery eyes, and the wrinkles in their skin. They have the little things that make conversation more significant.


I know that I must respond to her. She is glowering at me, anticipating for a response. I’ve never dealt with human confrontation before. Most humans are too frightened to speak to me, and almost all of them shiver with fear. We’re not all predators. I’ve never killed a human; I’ve never even harmed a human, not that I remember. I can only recall memories that they permitted when I was created.


She stands up, and takes three slow footsteps towards me. She is approximately four feet from the cell door. She does not seem afraid of me at all; she seems arduous. If I could read human facial expressions, I would know what she is thinking. I don’t have that expertise because of my lack of human interaction. As she takes another two steps, she begins to speak again.


“Do you, speak a language?” “Can you hear me?” “I’m talking to you!!”


Her voice begins to rise with every question asked. She is, angry with me. Her eyes are flaring and I can a small crinkle above the cuts on her forehead. Anger is surprisingly not a human emotion I’ve ever had to cope with. I’m not suppose to comfort these humans when they’re sad, and I’m certainly not suppose to have conversation with them when they try to engage in one. I need to step away from where I am standing, and remain unseen. I want to speak out, and give her answers, but I know I shouldn’t. She is becoming livid; I can see it in her eyes. They’re changing color, slowly but I see it. They’re becoming a dusky green, as they were hazel a few moments ago. My thoughts are scattered, evaluating both outcomes of my next move. Avoid a seemingly regrettable action, or communicate with this human girl, and see what the results may be.


She takes the final two steps as she approaches the cell door. Her eyes are continuously glued to my every motion. As I take a step backwards, the words seem to fall out of my dry, mechanized mouth.


“Hello there…”


Her face seems to change facial expressions; a new expression begins to form. An expression I’ve never seen. Before she can continue with a response, a movement from the hallway alarms us both. He is here for her. Her time is up. The other human girl in the cell starts to weep a little louder, as another of my kind steps towards the cell door.


He is a larger, stronger, more brutal version of myself. He was built as a warrior but they use him for interrogation, and intimidation steps. He puts all the fear into these humans so the administration knows exactly the kind of soul each one contains. That is how the occupations for each are determined. I don’t particularly care for him. I remember on my first day here, he accused me of being too silent around the humans. I guess I’m supposed to be cruel because of what I am? That’s just not the way I am. No humans have escaped or committed suicide while I’ve been here, so I’m performing my occupation in a productive manner.


He looks down at me, with an ignorant glare.  “I thought I heard shouting from a female voice. Does this girl warrant any course of punishment?”


“No.” I say as he steps into the cell and tags her wrist with a track device. She doesn’t squirm, or scream at all. Who is this girl?


As he takes her, her eyes build up a single tear, and I see the hazel color reappearing. She is almost out of sight, when she whips her head back at me, staring within me. She’s gone.


 

Part Two (Lindsay Pate): Fear

 

I feel his cold steel hands gripping at my tiny emaciated frame. His movements are so harsh they are almost violent. I wonder if he is going to hurt me, or worse. I need to be strong. I try to wrestle away from his forceful grip, to prove that I can walk on my own. He grips even more tightly to my arms.


            Loathing bubbles to the surface of my composure and froths over my words, as I demand that he let me go. For a moment I thought he was loosening his grip, but as we turn the corner into what resembles a doctor’s office, I regret my hostility. Abruptly, he hoists me into the air like a rag doll and slams me into the wall. As my body goes limp he hurls me down onto a cold, steel medical table. His hands are on either side of me holding down my wrists. I am terrified of what he may do to me.

           
His emotionless face hovers closely above mine, sending shivers down my spine.  In all the time of running and hiding from them I have never been so frightened. His face is so close it is nearly touching mine; I quiver in utter disgust and fear.


Finally he speaks, “Are you a virgin, little girl?”

           
I feel as though my heart has come to a complete stop and will never revive. Over the past few years I have heeded warnings that their kind rape girls my age. I have even overheard tales of a “sex game” that they play, exploiting humans. My mind races, as I attempt to think of a way out of this situation. There is not one.


He speaks again furiously, “Just answer my questions, girl.”


I have no other hope than to answer his interrogations and pray that he will let me go. My mind feels as though it is breaking, I can barely muster enough strength to speak.


My voice betrays me as it quivers, “Yes.”


Without hesitation he asks me another barrage of odd questions. I am confused as to what they mean, and petrified of what this knowledge may mean. Why are these questions so personal? Why does he care?

           
I think he is about to ask me another question when suddenly I feel his icy hand grasp tightly onto my left breast and he sneers, “Someone will be coming to give you an exam now, my pretty girl.”

           
I turn my head away in disgust and close my eyes, willing him to leave. After what feels like eternity he lets go of whatever part of my numb body he clutched and exits the room. I almost feel relieved that he is gone, until I realize that he said someone is coming to examine me. What the hell does that mean?

           
I see someone walking into the sterile room out of the corner of my eye. I recognize him through my delirious haze.  It is the “man” from earlier, the one who lied to him for me. The first kindness I have seen in months.


The only word I can muster from my disoriented state is, “You”.

 

 

 

Monday, January 7, 2013

Mechanical Heart- Part 1 By: Corey Seeley and Lindsay Pate


 
MECHANICAL HEART

A story series by: Corey Seeley and Lindsay Pate.
 
 
 Part 1(Corey): Thoughts.

 

I do not sleep, so at night I sit here and observe them all. Take in all of their thoughts, their dreams. I envy them for that. They can dream, bad dreams, good dreams. They get the privilege to imagine certain things that aren’t realistically possible. Sleeping is like a whole new world that I will never get to experience. I hear them breathing, soft, subtle breaths. In and out, like the wind blowing into my steal plates. They’re all breathing softly, except for one particular girl. She’s heavily breathing. So heavy, that I can hear her heart beating within every single gasp. I open up the cell door; I walk over, and stand beside her. As she starts to breath heavier, I creep a little closer towards her. I believe she’s having a nightmare. Her skin quickly becomes moist, her eyelids twitch with every second breath she exhales. I know I shouldn’t wake her up, but I find myself developing an emotion of some sort towards this girl. I don’t know exactly why, but I know our kind never feels such a humanlike symptom as emotions. She starts to inhale a little softer; she seems to be waking up. I step away, and lock the door. I gander through a tiny hole, and I see her eyes open. She’s awake.

 

Her eyes are swollen and red. She’s in a lot of pain, as are the rest of these humans. They are aware of where they are. Because, they know exactly what’s taken place over the last year. My species rule this planet now. Well, just about the entire planet. We no longer take human orders; we give out the orders. I don’t agree with everything we do, but I simply do what is asked of me, and stay unnoticed. I never thought about how a human feels, because we weren’t programmed to think about how they feel. I’ve talked to a lot of my acquaintances, and none of them recall any meaningful thoughts. I’ve thought about some of the things we put certain humans through, and it does bother me. I won’t say anything though. I can’t risk a member of the administration finding out I’m progressing thoughts and feelings. They punish some of us for not obeying commands, so I can only imagine what would happen if they found out what goes on in my skull.

 

As I continue to examine her, she starts to communicate with another human of her kind. A female, who also looks bruised and damaged. They are engaging in conversation, probably about how they were captured. As I try to hear the whispers of their exchange, I find myself concentrating on her eyes. Pain, is all I can see. Not from the bruising or bloodstains on her shirt. The physical pain doesn’t seem to faze her. I see a different kind of pain within her. I see something, different about her. Part of me, can’t look away. Why? I feel, drawn to this girl. I’m baffled as to what is going on within myself. This moment is abnormal, but then again, so is this existence that I pretend to live daily.

 

She notices me, and looks straight at me. “Hey there.”

 

Part 1(Lindsay): Questions

I open my eyes sluggishly; the stinging is almost unbearable. How long have I been here? I struggle to remember. My eyes thrash fighting the overwhelming darkness.  The only sound I can make out is a trembling breath, seemingly nearby. The harder I strain to hear, the more the sound resembles a whimper. Are there other people down here? Have other humans survived? Why did I?

The thoughts that consume my mind are excruciating. I try to focus on something else, anything else. I see a small light gleaming through a tiny hole in the wall. I place my hands on the freezing cold, stone barrier, steadying my weak body. Slowly, I move to put my eye to the light. I’m not sure what scares me more: what I may see, or more nothingness. 

The hole is so small that it is hard to focus on anything in particular. As my eyes become less hazy, I see what appear to be fellow humans sitting in what resembles a taciturn cafeteria. The food resembles pig slop, and the people appear miserable. I wonder if they are kept in the darkness as well. 

Hearing the pitiful whimper again I choke out a greeting, “Hello?”

A small dainty voice mimics mine, “Hello?”

It sounds as if she is in the same room with me, but it is too dark to tell. I use my hands to follow the wall, moving steadily towards the voice.

“What is your name?” I ask gently, trying not to startle her.

She struggles momentarily to clear her throat, finally answering, “Lenka.”

The accent thick in her voice, it was clear, Lenka was a native to Czech Republic.  How had we come to this place? Have we been here long?

I shook my head to regain what seemed my last shred of sanity. “Lenka, I am Adeline. Do you speak English?”

Lenka’s voice quivered, “Y…Yes.. I speak some English. How long we here, Adeline?  I scared.”

I am very grateful that this girl speaks some English, broken or not. This is not the time to worry about such trivial things. I want answers. 

A flash went through my mind as I remembered them tearing me away from my mother and father. I watched as they ripped my mother’s arm clean off of her body to separate us. Her limb hung there in my hand as I watched her eyes fill with anguish and intense pain. It was torture. There was nothing any of us could do to stop it. Blood drenched the floor from her body as they ripped off her other limb, still clinging to my father. They laughed at our feeble attempts to stay together. They felt nothing. The horror ensued for days. I was punished for not having the information they thought I would.  I still am not sure what they wanted, or why they kept me alive. What could I possibly have that they wanted? 

Realizing I left Lenka in a puddle of tears, I attempted to put my focus on her.  I am cognizant that I am stuck in this cold, miserable room right along with Lenka, but something inside me strengthens me to comfort her. To tell her that we will somehow get out of this, even though, I am not sure if I believe it myself.   

“Lenka, is anyone else in this room?” I spoke confidently trying to mask my own uncertainties.

“No, I not see anyone else. I only see you. It so dark Adeline, how we get out of here?”  Lenka forced. 

“I don’t know yet, Lenka. But I will not give up.” I struggle to comfort her.

I meant it. After watching my mother being torn to pieces and my father taken God knows where, I will never give up. I would rather die than give into these machines.  I will not go down without a fight. I will not succumb to their torture. 

My blood is boiling with anger as my earlier sorrow is replaced with severe rage.  I am a strong girl, as was my mother. I will not let these animals take my strength or my will, but I have to be smart about this. I have to find a way to understand what they want, so that I can find a way out. 

My mind feels resilient but my body is weak. I use the walls to explore the room and stumble upon what feels like a cot. I begin to climb in. I need my strength. Just as I am about to lie down I see the outline of what looks like a man, standing in the darkness.  My breath catches in my throat as a light ignites from above, searing my unaccustomed eyes.  I knew I had to look into his eyes to know for sure. The violet ring shone brightly around his hazel iris. He is one of them.

I speak out calmly so I don’t startle him, “Hey there.”

Sunday, December 30, 2012

LIEBSTER AWARD!!



Liebster

 
Looky, Looky!!! I received a Liebster award for my blog!  A huge thank you to BJ Sheldon for the nomination!  "You love me, you really love me!"  Okay all drama aside, it was unexpected and completely flattering to be nominated by my fellow blogger and writer.  BJ Sheldon recently accepted a publishing deal with Wandering in the Words Press, I just wanted to congratulate her and thank her for always being so lovely and supportive.
 
Here are the inner workings of the award:
 
- I list 11 random facts about myself.
- I will answer the 11 questions asked of me by the person who nominated me.
- I will then nominate my 11 picks for the award along with my 11 questions for them to answer when they post a response.
- If you’re nominated, your name/link will appear at the bottom of this post along with your questions. Follow the same format; paste the award badge to your blog, give us 11 random facts about yourself, answer my 11 questions, and choose your nominees…but you cannot nominate the blog who nominated you.

 
 
11 Random Facts About Me:

1.  I am a Pisces and believe I fit the profile through and through.

2.  My boyfriend and I have the same birthday.  Yes, we are entirely too much alike sometimes.

3.  I have been a hairstylist for almost 13 years.

4. I am the almost step-mom of two girls, who I love dearly.

5.  I have always loved writing but did not take the leap to actually become a writer until about a year ago.

6.  I have crazy, vibrant, intense dreams almost nightly.

7.  I am all creativity and common sense.  I am not structured or analytical at all, which even
     drives me crazy at times.

8.  When I was young I used highlighters to color my barbies hair then blew them up with bottle rockets.

9.  I am highly loyal and love my family more than anything.

10.   I am an insatiable traveler, I have been to 14 countries, which is not nearly enough in my mind.

11.  I love wine. That is all.

BJ Sheldon's Questions For Me:

-Dogs or cats? Definitely dogs.  Sorry Twitter friends, I just love dogs:)  Besides I'm allergic to cats.

-Who is your favorite author? This is a hard one, I do not really have one favorite.  I love every author and so many different genres of books.  Most recently I have enjoyed S.C. Stephens.  Her Thoughtless and Effortless books are simple but they evoke true feeling.

-What is your favorite classic novel and why? I love "Farewell to Arms" or really any Ernest Hemingway novel.  I love the complexity of his books and how descriptive they can be. 

-If there was one person, either dead or alive, you could spend the day with, who would it be and why? Totally Ernest Hemingway... I think we would just get waisted together and hopefully write something beautiful.  He was a brilliant, grumpy, drunk and I love that about him.

-Book or eReader? I have to say I'm a HUGE eReader fan! I think it is so much more convenient and it saves trees (there's the hippie in me). 

-If they turned your life into a big screen movie, who would play you? I'm not sure but everyone else says a younger Marisa Tomei.  Though I hope I would be a strong female in my role.

-What was it that drew you to become a writer? I needed somewhere to spill creativity and explore the tornado that constantly whirs around in my head.  I love to create and for a long time that was hair.  Don't get me wrong I still enjoy my job, but at this point that's what it is, a job.  Writing is my love, my way to create something that doesn't exist or to make sense of something that does. 

-What is your idea of the perfect day? Well... I'm not going to say "long walks on the beach", but, I think a day filled with a good book, wine, yummy food and sex would probably take the cake for me. 

-What is the name of the person who inspired you the most growing up? How did they inspire you? My mother inspired me the most growing up.  She was a single mom for a while and never let us feel like we were missing out on anything.  She has always been strong, supportive and loving.  I don't think I would have the courage to write or follow any dream without her. 

-Who is your hero and why?  My grandmother.  She was one bad ass bitch!  She said what she thought, and always did what she said.  She never took no for an answer and always believed in herself.  She was not the dainty, proper grandma that your picturing.  No, she was beautiful, fashion forward, smart as hell, and would tell you to "Shut the Fuck Up" if you were annoying her.  She was a voracious reader and the person that really showed me the beauty in books and in writing.  She wrote beautifully, with all of her heart.  She is my hero!

-Where do you hope to be as a writer in ten years?  In ten years... hmm... As I am not much of a planner I tend to take things a day at a time.  But, I do hope to have published a few books that I can truly love and be proud of.  Oh, and I hope you all will love them too:) 


Here are my nominations. Click on their links below and  it will take you to their websites.

Corey Seeley                                 http://www.coreyseeley.blogspot.com

Bobby Salomons                          http://www.severedlimbmovement.wordpress.com

Christopher  Liccardi                                http://thedarkerhalf.com

Caroline Rainbow                        http://carolinerainbow.blogspot.com

Kasten Hidalgo                            http://girlnamedlime.blog.com

Franza Haindl                             http://www.franzad.wordpress.com

Andrew Hovenden                       http://ahovenden.com

Amy Gregory                               http://amygregory548.blogspot.com

Elena Jacob                                 http://ravenhartassociates.com

Colleen Albert                             http://cmalbert.blogspot.com

Jaime Guerard                            http://jaimeguerard.wordpress.com

Okay my lovely nominees.. here are your 11 questions:

1.  What is your favorite thing to rant about?

2.  What is your favorite aspect of writing?

3.  What makes you feel the best that you have ever felt?

4.  How structured are you with your writing?

5.  What has been the best book you have read in the last year?

6.  What is your favorite genre of books to write? To read?

7.  What or who inspires you to write?

8.  How do you picture your writing career developing?

9.  Who is your favorite classic author?  Why?

10.  Do you enjoy writing true to life events or creating your own world?

11.  What is your favorite short story you have ever written?

Congratulations to you all!! Enjoy! XOXO









Tuesday, December 11, 2012

THOMAS SUTTON "The Final Say"

"The Five Wives of the Insatiable Thomas Sutton"

You can read the Prologue here: http://lpate85.blogspot.com/2012/12/the-five-wives-of-insatiable-thomas.html
Zhen Zhen "2nd Wife" here: http://lpate85.blogspot.com/2012/12/zhen-zhen-2nd-wife.html
Martha here: http://lpate85.blogspot.com/2012/12/martha-3rd-wife.html

I just want to thank everyone for joining in this last week.  It was so much fun having 5 different guest writers along on my blog.  You are all amazingly talented and I am lucky to call you all friends.  Thank you as well to all of our lovely followers and readers.  I hope you have enjoyed our entries as much as we have enjoyed writing them!  Let's do this again soon:) 

Thomas Sutton "The Final Say"

Five entries later and I don’t know whether to thank my dear wives for all of their loving words and understanding, or spank them for being so bad.  I did give them full approval to be honest, but, shit that was more than I had anticipated.  I will say, I love my life today, even more than yesterday.  I am happy to hear that in their own way, every wife is fulfilled in this relationship.  I know there are downfalls at times, but, we truly are a family.  Besides, I get to punish them all later for this, and I SO look forward to it.  Get ready ladies because “Daddy” is coming for you!

As you can see they each have their own captivating personality.  Some even two.  Each is completely remarkable outside and in.  We are not perfect, but, we all love each other wholly.   

I’d like to speak about each wife individually because that is how I think about them.  As you have read, each wife has her own story, her own feelings and her own self.  I never control this for them, I want them to maintain their own identities and be open to me.

Firstly is Sheila, that kinky little minx.  She would run me and the other wives ragged with her fearlessness and willingness to please.   Sheila finds pleasure in being a chameleon, in discovering what truly satisfies everyone in the house and doing just that.  Whether the indulgence is sexual or not, she finds a way to fulfill.  I cannot complain about her ravenous sex drive or greedy mouth.  She cares deeply for all the wives and does a wonderful job at being the glue, making sure everyone feels appreciated. 

Zhen Zhen, my quiet raven.  She is exotic, shy, and deep.  Her soul makes me feel things that are mysterious even to me.  She believes I lie to her, but, there is nothing to lie about.  Her eyes mesmerize me.  I know there is so much pain in Zhen Zhen’s past and every time she opens up to me, I want to thank her.  I climb on top of her and show her how a man really takes care of his wife.  She is a flower, a delicate blossom and she smells like the beautiful Jasmine that I adore.  I am thankful for her sincerity, and her warmth.  She is a rock in the home, whether she knows it or not.

Martha… my syrupy, devoted Martha.  She has probably had the most challenging road in this relationship.  She already had a daughter, a beautiful daughter, who was not raised in this type of lifestyle.  I think Martha’s daughter following her here is a true testament to what an amazing mother she is.  I wish I could make her see that more often.    I know she dreams of being in charge, she dreams of the power.  If only I could make her understand that my wives are the ones with the power.  I am merely a man trying to please and provide for them all.  My life revolves around them, not me.  She adds so much light to the house, I am so lucky to have stopped to help her that day. 

Anne-Marie, my complex beauty.  She battles with herself.  She tears herself apart at times.  I know someday we will build her strength enough to let go of Marie.  She just needs to realize that SHE is Marie, that she is that strength and that fire.  Anne is the gentlest woman and someday together, we will find her balance.  I love her, both sides of her, because in the end she is one in the same person.  I will love her no matter how long her internal battle rages, because she shows me strength and courage every day.  She will never give up.

 Constantsa Gorgeousa, my lovely spitfire.  She is about as independent as they come and I worship that about her.  I enjoy that she feels free to be herself, in our life and in our love.  She had a rocky past with a few men who did not treat kindly, and I am thrilled to hear that she feels unrestricted with me.  She says she has it made, well she does.  I spoil her like crazy and she spoils me right back.  As the newest wife she has taken on a lot, but, she always manages to give right back.

I know you all have read this, at times feeling jealous and at times feeling pity.  Do not pity me.  Do not pity my wives.  We have all chosen this life, and we all make every day as meaningful as we can.   I am fortunate to be surrounded in this much love, honesty and devotion.  I only hope that your relationships have half as many of these virtues.  Thank you for taking the time to hear our side of the story.  Just so you know…we may be up for wife number six soon if you’re feeling feisty.

Now line up ladies because it's time for me to remind you all who is the man around here.  *Slapping the crop in his hand*